Oh man I did NOT see that coming
I wasn't expecting it to be like that.....man that's serious, serious dramatic tension you let build there. I'd wanna watch it again to see the old guys reaction, but at the same time I don't wanna have another heart attack. Though I'll admit it's not thursday morning breakfast material, It was the best tasting heart attack i'd ever had
I'VE spat out better......ME for gods sake
I would say I'm one of the worst flash artists around, and man this makes me look like walt disney. There are no hands, no decent character animation, and any time you took to animate this was probably spent on the semi decnt lip sync. Really you have to take some criticism for this, because if you can't where are you gonna be later on, when you have real peers to look your work, not just
e-arseholes like me. I wonder how this passed, and has how much lower standards are then last I posted here. for my first reveiw back in months, i'm not impressed.
so good, and could be even better
i think that you did really well with this. It is really simple which I take some issue with. I mean to say that there are some little touches you could've put into it to make it more involving. Then again movement, like say having the gras under her move with wind every once in awhile, or the stars pulsing, might be too distracting from the text. I know I caught myself looking at the blinking...then again I notice the little details like that. I think if you do another poem type of thing, it may help to go to get a voice actor to read it for you, or do it yourself. anyway it was very nice and just try to think about the little things
awesome idea, decently executed
I really like the concept of a full out rpg in flash form. I'm not sure if your implementation was the best but it works. My biggest gripe is the control scheme. Making the mouse the main selection tool is a big mistake. It makes selection slow and cumbersome. I think that this will however get the ball rolling for some serious work on online rpg's that are long and could be constantly added to. it's a big difference from the open ended, un-involving world of something like ragnarok. Having a good story is a good idea. I'm willing to help if you need it on the next one, because this is something I can get behind.
zipperfish always delivers the goods
i gotta say this thing is sweet. alot of the 13 year old graphics whores on here wouldn't get many of them right, but it brings a fond memory to my eyes. should put on some more questions. maybe a speed round. only complaint is that the mario was pretty bad.
this info is already on the site, odds are this will get lost in the mish mash of other tutorials, or people just won't watch it. it was well done and covered all the bases, i just doubt it will be seen much
But you see, noobs dont go on the FAQ, they go aroudn the fourm going, 'Zomg what do i do' then you can tell them to go on a tutorial, other then go on the FAQ, it will be less confusing for them
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